maybedreamin
Hey! I'm really enjoying the "Spinner Wars." I don't know if you have given up on the story or not (I hope not), but you should finish it. It's a great story. Maybe build in more epic back story, write in sensory details, increase the conflict, and push the plot with every chapter, and you could have something on your hands. I've never seen a concept like this. Make it your own before someone else tries. Great work :)
