Underthescoreboard

How the heck do you write scenes where they are kissing without sounding like a total idiot and making yourself and everyone who's reading it cringe super hard?
          	
          	... Asking for a friend. Anyways guys I'm not dead I'm so sorry I have't uploaded in so long BUT I'M BACK BABY!!! 
          	
          	NEW CHAPTER TONIGHT

IamJustLadyD

@Underthescoreboard don't worry about it, I think the right ones will find it here and Ao3 :)
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Underthescoreboard

Thank you!!! I'm happy to be back!!! I'm just a little worried that since I took such a long break my story wont do well now and no one will read it 
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IamJustLadyD

@Underthescoreboard Yaaaas girl! I've been missing your story, glad you're back!
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Underthescoreboard

How the heck do you write scenes where they are kissing without sounding like a total idiot and making yourself and everyone who's reading it cringe super hard?
          
          ... Asking for a friend. Anyways guys I'm not dead I'm so sorry I have't uploaded in so long BUT I'M BACK BABY!!! 
          
          NEW CHAPTER TONIGHT

IamJustLadyD

@Underthescoreboard don't worry about it, I think the right ones will find it here and Ao3 :)
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Underthescoreboard

Thank you!!! I'm happy to be back!!! I'm just a little worried that since I took such a long break my story wont do well now and no one will read it 
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IamJustLadyD

@Underthescoreboard Yaaaas girl! I've been missing your story, glad you're back!
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Underthescoreboard

One thing about reading a lot of stories at once in a single genre is that I always want to go back and read the story from the start over again whenever a new chapter is out. I want to make sure that I'm not confusing the plot with another story so would you guys want short synopsis of the story at the beginning of the chapters?

Underthescoreboard

Is anyone willing to proof read my latest chapter? I'm pretty sick right now and I want to make sure it's understandable and flows well. Along with grammar and things like that. You'd have to have social media of some kind that I could send it to you.

IamJustLadyD

@Underthescoreboard okay, I'm checking it! :)
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Underthescoreboard

@IamJustLadyD Just followed you and sent you an email with it. My personal email is a little different then my users but I lyk in the email
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IamJustLadyD

@Underthescoreboard hey, I'm up for it if you want! My twitter and email it's my username iamjustladyd@gmail.com, I'll be glad to help you :)
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