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I'm posting my first English book now, I have a prologue and chapter one. Don't judge because the chapters are short. This is my first English book that I'm writing. It's called oblivion. hope you'll like it.
          goodbye,
          Carmellie

Thanks for the helpul critism, it was really useful:)

Hello, thank you for following me!

Hey
          thanks for following me!
          Now I have only Dutch books, but when I'm done with one I'll make and English book called: Oblvion.
          hope you'll Like it
          xx Mell

Hii thanks for the follow! :) i followed back~

Hey :)
          
          I saw you have twitter. I've got a twitter if you want to follow @scarlettwattpad