UnhingedAsshole

HELP I PUT MOZZERELLA ON MY FRENCH TOAST I THINK IM DYING

simple4thoughts

Hey red :))
          
          Just giving a response to you asking about writing tips. 
          
          First thanks so much for the compliment :)) blushing. 
          
          Second I already love your writing. 
          
          The best I can help I can give is just try to pay attention to grammar and punctuation. I have no one to edit for me so sometimes I’ll put it into docs and see what it tells me to correct. 
          
          Ps. I used to SUCK at writing. Like bad. Like really bad. But I started and didn’t stop and now I’m somewhat decent. 
          
          Looking forward to the rest of your book!! 
          
          <3

UnhingedAsshole

@simple4thoughts thank you, and no problem at all! You deserve it. Remember me when you're famous gurl, just saying.
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simple4thoughts

You’re too sweet. Literally kicking my feet. Thank you thank you! 
            
            I’m pretty sad about Devyn a Lexi too. I’m very attached to their characters but I didn’t want to drag it on and cause conflict where there doesn’t need to be. One of my pet peeves.
            
            I’m really excited to continue your story, loving the main characters already and the dynamic between the initial love interests. You’re already very good so it’ll be cool to see how your writing progresses.
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UnhingedAsshole

@simple4thoughts 
             no way your writing is basically what I aspire for my own to be like, it's literally perfect. And yeah, I've been trying to improve and have a friend who's editing for me heh. 
            
            It makes me so sad that Devyn and Lexin's story ended, like, so so sad. I loved their arcs and spice and realistic view of everything, you really blended everything well into their age, backstory, and personality.
            
            I'm so glad you liked my book, I've spent time I should have been studying on that thing and I really hope it's turning out great, and coming from an author like you, it warmed my heart.
            
            I'm so excited for your next book and waiting on the edge of my seat!
            
            <3
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Rayescape

Hey, I’m Ray and I’m sorry that it took so long for me to respond to your message. 
          
          I meant it seriously, when I said I’d like to be an editor for you.
          I really like the chapters and the story and would love if this books gets an ending in the future.
          
          We can talk over dc— or a preferred platform of your suggestion— about more details, like boundaries, expectations and other non-book related things. <3

Rayescape

No worries, I do not mind writing over e-mail. 
            E-Mail: ray883609@gmail.com 
            Dc.      : rayescape (Display name is Ray)
            
            Feel free to contact me on both! <3
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UnhingedAsshole

@Rayescape no way girl thanks so much.
            
            Alr so I have discord, if that's what you mean by dc. Tho I'd prefer talking over email. Because my friends dont know about my story and im not ready to tell them yet. So maybe you can give me your email? I promise to keep it confidential, you dont need to worry, you can just drop it here and I'll delete it as soon as I get it? Or we can talk right here in wattpad. I don't have a big audience here so its quite private.
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