Hey! I just read your story, and I know how it is to be an aspiring author. You've got a good story going so far, but there's always room for improvement!
If you need any tips, you could always check out my story "Silently Falling."
It follows the story of a girl, Raine, who was forced to lose her voice. She learned sign language to communicate and that becomes her way of life. Then she meets him; West Love- the infamous bad boy delinquent of the town. No one truly knows why he was sent to jail, and rumors continuously float around what he could have done. Raine tries to avoid his constant smirks and dangerous attitude, but he's taken an interest in her and doesn't plan on letting her go. What happens when she realizes that maybe she doesn't want him to? In a mix of sexy guys, sarcastic humor, and a blooming romance, "Silently Falling" is the next big thing.
I hope you decide to give my story a read, and if you do and you end up loving it be sure to vote and comment!
Highest ranking so far: #224 in teen fiction (and with your help we can make it to #1- or just the top 100) ❤️❤️
