@ruirui@criminalminder@TheOrangutan@CrAzYpErSoNs101@abi978 no problem you guys :) would you guys mind reading my story out of bounds, even just the first page and give me some advice on how to improve it :) I'd REALLY appreciate that
Hi Suez, just thought I'd pop over and say thanks for fanning. I've no idea what I've done to deserve that but it's always grand to meet someone new. Hope you enjoy anything of mine you happen to read, comment / critique is always welcomed. Cheers, Gav