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@IaComplete_cyclepath nah. Just took an extended break. I've started back working on the next chapter, and cleaning up the earlier ones as I go

@UnknownName32 hey just saying don't think it's too crazy that you inspired someone to make their own story all great writer's do. Also when you read my story don't expect it to be super polished or anything because this is my first time writing but I except any constructive criticism I can get so I can improve my story to make it more appealing. Also about the whole don't let people's negativity bother me I got that covered because I've been made fun of so many times at school that I already know not to let other people bring me down but thank you so much for the advice and encouragement just thank you is what I'm trying to say

@NerdGuy00 mateocorella6! Yeah dude I remember! I'll definitely be reading your stuff! I appreciate all the support you've thrown my way so it's the very least I could do. It's crazy to think I had any part in giving someone creative inspiration, but that's probably the coolest and best thing about storytelling in general. I'm new to writing things recreationally, but I've found a lot of purpose and peace in it. 
            
            If I could just say one thing to you it would be that it takes a lot of courage and hard work to produce any story worth telling. In my experience, There will be a lot of positivity come your way, and there will also be people who are negative. Don't let those who share that negativity get to you. Just let it roll off your back. It'll be difficult, but trust me, nothing anyone says should discourage you from writing something you enjoy. 
            
            I'll be reading along as I continue writing myself. 

Based on the interactions of your version of Shoto and the other two… probably Kyoka. They both have this deadpan when needed but completely sassy when needed type switch to them that can make them a force to be reckoned with. Especially since they have both (directly in the case of Shoto, more indirectly in Kyoka’s case) caught some of Peter’s habits of snarking (Kyoka got it more from Momo, who got it from Peter, but you are probably getting what I mean). Plus I think Mina loves being a Cupid for others… although I would be interested to see your version of a Mina Kiri relationship as well. 

@Fireheartsage Hey there! Wanted to hop on here and say that you have no idea how much I appreciate all of that! I'm glad you found it on FanFiction first, it's a more polished version than the one here bc I get to proofread it one extra time and I've been too busy to fix up this version. To be honest, I'm not super confident in my writing abilities, so when I read this it really made my day! This is only the second thing I've ever wrote (I did a DBZ one that's absolutely hot garbage don't read it lol Might go back to it some day...) I'm really glad you managed to make it past the first three chapters. I feel like they need to be rewritten or added onto. Im seriously glad that you like it. I'm not exactly a well of knowledge when it comes to Marvel, but I've loved spiderman since I saw the first Toby Maguire movie in theatres when I was six years old... But I'm a massive MHA fan so it kinda evens out. I love the sports festival, but mother of God it's so hard writing a tournament. I'm kinda glad to be done with it lol. I'm glad you liked Peter's backstory... I almost didn't put it out there because I was afraid of how it'd be received by marvel fans. As a fellow writer yourself, your words mean a great deal to me. I'm definitely gonna check your stuff out as well! 
            
            I would like your opinion on something though...
            
            I really wanna give Shoto a girlfriend in this story. If I do it's gonna be either Mina Ashido, or Kyoka Jiro. Problem is, those are both characters with some pretty popular ships already with Kirishima and Kaminari. So part of me also thinks that I should just keep him single. If you could vote between those three options, what would you choose? 
            
            Chapter 21 is almost done! Hope you enjoy it as well!