Unknownguy007

Great! 

@SHMU3L  I think it's really good so far, I am enjoying reading it and look forward to new chapters.

@Celesti_Galac No problem, I like your story so far.

@solitary_genius_2307  That's up to you mate, cause in the book you wrote that it would be a one shot that is one to two pages long. I think based on whatever your plans are for that story you should decide if you want to continue it or not. Personally I think it would be better if you transform that story from a one shot to a short story with around 5-10 chapters. It takes place during the blank period and sakura is pregnant in your story so maybe your story could revolve around sasuke and sakuras life during her pregnancy and how they deal with its challenges (hormones, new eating habits etc), or it could be another aspect of their life during the blank period it's up to you, but I think its better if you change it from a one shot to a short story so you can have a proper start, middle and end for your story rather than a more abrupt ending. Plus you can add more elements and depth to your story if you make it longer than a one shot. I think the premesis for your story is good, it's always nice to see sasukes interactions with sakuras family, their interactions in that chapter were good however it could have been longer. This is all just my opinion what really matters is your own thoughts and plans for your story.

So should i continue or not i would love to hear your honest opinion.! 

@solitary_genius_2307 thanks dude

@Unknownguy007 I am really glad. I will write it soon.

@Sasusaku4ever__  No problem, I like reading your story, looking forward to new chapters.

I’m happy that u liked it!! I will be publishing chapter two tomorrow hehe ♥︎

@_Yuunaa  No problem, the first two chapters were really good, I look forward to reading the rest of it when it comes out.

@Unknownguy007 Thank you! I’m glad you like it :) 

@Love_Doughnuts  No problem, I'm really enjoying reading your story. It is amazing.

@QuincieB No problem, your story is very interesting to read.