hwan_jiniee
I Find u!! (>ω<)(>ω<)(>ω<)
WAKU WAKU （；^ω^）
Unknownmusic44
nouraiyy
Can you follow me? I'm I will write a new Michael Jackson fanfiction in English. I need your support. ❤️❤️
Unknownmusic44
Guess it has been a full 27 hours and I have not gotten a single notification usually I have 99+
Unknownmusic44
So I'm working on a new chapter but I feel like it is turning out pretty badly I'm not too sure about it it's like what they're thinking at the time I guess I don't know I might delete it and remake it depending on how I feel about it but I would love some Intel on it or you know your opinion
hwan_jiniee
I wait for u
hwan_jiniee
(´；ω；｀)
hwan_jiniee
Are u here?
hwan_jiniee
WAKU WAKU (>ω<)
s1mple-reader
If you wanna chat or help my snap is;cbaforyou9 you'll see Sarah or jus text me
Unknownmusic44
@s1mple-reader tbh I asked for advice so I'm glad you gave it I'm actually very happy because your the first one to reach out and help
s1mple-reader
Nah lowkey I’m sorry if it came across like I was shaming your story, I was just sharing my opinion and giving advice but someone else might’ve loved it! That’s good to lessen on ai I think like I said my pov! I think it must’ve been messed around or maybe the nothing to give but love book for sure because if I just scrolled through it, it must’ve been a mj book lol. Because I’ve been looking through the mj books to see good ones although I’m not obsessed with him the story’s are just good particularly, the nothing to give but love and some short story as well x yes it was one of them I’m sure lol. That’s good that you’re taking inspo from other authors good thinking!
Unknownmusic44
@s1mple-reader Soo I edited my book entirely taking out a lot of the pictures and I didn't use ai this time instead I edited it to what I would normally say I hope this is better but I must ask what book did you find me on? I have been reading a lot of different fan fics on Michael so I'm assuming it was one of them in trying to learn how other authors word things by reading there work.
s1mple-reader
I'm gonna be honest with you, I saw your comment on a book I was scrolling through to see if I liked it. I felt bad so I looked at your parts of the book you made. If I'm honest it's not my vibe and probs not alot of others, it's ai first of all it's so unrealistic, it's almost like you're telling us a story through images. Sorry if I'm wrong but a lot of nowaday books are based on description rather than image unless it's a film so people may not read it because of that reason. My advice is; if you wanna carry on the story project put a disclaimer, that it's an image described y/n fan fiction. Don't take this as me coming after you, take it as advice and know that there's room for improvement; unless you want the story to be like description of the images. Idk but just wanted to reach out and advice you to make it more realistic even if it takes years. And you wanna make a good rememberable book listen to feed back, and make the reader feel like they're there. Especially if it's a mj fiction bc everyone's obsessed with him know the films out in a good or bad way still obsessed. I dont read mj fictions bc it's mj it just sounds good the ones I read and I imagine myself in it so yh! Have a good rest of your day xx stay in touch I'll follow you xx sweet regards
Unknownmusic44
@s1mple-reader okk I'll see if I can find it I would love to stay in touch as well I'll tell you whenever I get my phone fixed
s1mple-reader
Wait, how are you dyslexic and write such good stories? No wayyyy!! Also, don't doubt yourself. Just go over your work xx . It's good to use photos if it makes it easier for people to understand you 100%. Don't take everything. I said literally, just do what suits you . I would love to keep in touch, too. I'm sorry I didn't reply sooner! Oh, I'm sorry your phones broke! I'll send my main account, but I just wanna say I'm not online as much bc I have loads to do so, yk! But it's Lizzyx as the display name, although lizzy isn't my real name!
Unknownmusic44
@s1mple-reader hello I thank you so much for your advice I will admit I have not trusted my writing skills enough because I'm scared if I wright out and explain what's happening people will take it the wrong way because I'm dyslexic and I have noticed a lot of people don't understand whenever I describe things so I have been using a lot of photos to help them understand and I use ai to punctuate better in case I missed something I would love to keep in touch because you seem like you can help me a lot but my phone is currently broken and I can't get into my snap as easy but once I get a nother one I would love to get your snap