UnlikelyKings

A new chapter of Reckless is coming out this afternoon! I'm going to post it after work

UnlikelyKings

I said I wasn't changing the story of A War On Her World, but as I re-read it, I realised it was obvious I had no previous writing experience. Quite frankly, the story was bad and the main character was worse. I am confident that my ideas were solid, but the execution was just not it. 
          
          In saying that, editing will take longer that I expected. The main story will remain pretty much the same, but I will be adding extra scenes that I had planned out and didn't add, and I will be cutting a lot of unnecessary scenes.
          
           I will still try and get a couple chapters out a week if I can't get one out a day. But the plan still stands.

UnlikelyKings

I will begin editing ch. 15 of A War On Her World tomorrow and hopefully have it posted by Saturday. I apologise for the wait, but it has been a busy time for me.
          
          Merry Christmas to those that celebrate!
          Happy holidays to those who enjoy them!
          And have a great day to everyone else!

UnlikelyKings

I have just drafted chapters 10-49 of A War On Her World as I am HEAVILY editing them. I have edited them in the past, but they are still bad. The story will remain the same, but dialogue and description will change. 
          
          It will be slow at first, but should get faster the further into the story I get because the quality will be better in the later chapters. I will aim for at least one chapter a day, but that should be more on days that I am not working.
          
          To put it into perspective, I have edited 9 chapters in the past three days with the most  editing being done yesterday and today.
          
          Sorry for the inconvenience and thank you to the people who have read the story from start to finish and actually enjoyed it. You guys are the true troopers here.

UnlikelyKings

Ah, sorry for the inconsistencies with Benji's age to size ratio. If I am being honest, I don't know what a kid looked like of how they act lol. 
          
          I have edited some of the actions and dialogue to better fit his growth in the most recent chapters, but I apologise if they are still inaccurate to real life.

UnlikelyKings

It has been quite a while since I updated any of my stories, but I am back (at least for now)! 
          
          I have posted a new story that I have had an idea of for quite a while and I am currently working on another chapter of Fragmented Morality. Once I have that chapter edited and posted, I will be working on another chapter of A War On Their World. 
          
          I am busy, so I don't have a time frame put together, but what is a little procrastination when I have been hit with an inspiration to write? 
          
          Anyway, I hope you enjoy! And thank you for sticking around for this long.

UnlikelyKings

I would just like to let everyone know that I have marked A War On Her World as completed!
          
          I know I already posted chapter 46, but I felt it would be best to create a new cover instead. So, I have transferred chapter 46 of A War On Her World to chapter 1 of A War On Their World.
          
          I hope there was no confusion!