Untamed_mess

Hey everyone! I know I haven't been active but soon there'll be an update!
          	Also..add me on ask.fm and go ahead and shoot any questions you wanna ask with the hashtag #wattpad and I'll answer all of them!
          	My username on ask.fm is
          	@priyanka_pg101
          	
          	love you all heaps! :)

emmawand

Just started your book and you've got me hooked!  Please take a look at my book Audition and tell me what you think!

emmawand

Thanks so much!
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Untamed_mess

@EmmaStories10 thank you so much! surely I'll add it to my library!
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Jay_2502

hey..i think is uptill now ur story is perfect..!! the things i like about ur story is the DETAILING - THE WAY U DSCRIBE THE CHARACTERS..ND INVOLVEMENT OF EVERY CHARACTER IN THE THEME..MST IMP IS THE WORDS U USE R JST PURE N PRFCT!! to write a teenage luv story @ this age is fascinating thng about u!! coming to ur..story so far is goin perfct with all elements!! i will tell stories r of two type..1st in which nly two r focused within the story..nd 2nd in which mre thn two characters including a villian.!! teenage luv stories r alwz difficult...bcoz the story jst rotates about the hero n heroine..nd while in other stories the hero wrks in two stories the one with the villian nd the other with her heroine..so the readers do not get bore..while the teenage luv story hve certain limits tht r u cnt go beyond tht!! so my point is alwz keep the thrill in ur story so tht readers r alwz kept in suspense nd they will njoy reading it!! okay..in ur 10th chap u jst introduced a new character..so i think tht was the twist in ur story..bt suddenly u in ur 11th chap tht nw jared n rach t together..so the thrill of nathan's character blowed away!! y u were in so hurry?? when u introduced a new character so u should show him in upto 2-3 CHAP nd then u should include ur 11thchap so jst this was point i wanted to say..!! or overall ur story i just love it!! the way u write i liked tht!! keep goin..dnt stop writing..!! as a reader i cn say tht may tht ppl nt leave thier feedback..bt they would definitely liking ur story as i do!! nd keep ur climax in mind nd then write u will get more good outcome!! keep writing, readers r definetly loving ur story !!so will be waiting for ur new update soon  !! @priyanka_101

Jay_2502

@priyanka_101 okay..will be waiting for it..!! ;)
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Untamed_mess

thanks for the feedback. Some things are better unsaid..Nathan is a character that I purposely added...you'll see why..
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Untamed_mess

Hey everyone! Just listen to me and don't jump to conclusions just yet.
          
          I don't whether I should continue to write or not...I'M NOT GETTING FEEDBACK! So I'm really confused about whether i should continue to write just like this or should I change??
          
          PLEASE LEAVE FEEDBACK! IT'LL MEAN THE WORLD TO ME!
          
          XOXO
          -Priyanka G.