Untouched16

Question regarding Welcome to Asteria. I'll be honest, I'm wondering where I can go next with this.
          	
          	As mentioned in the description, its an adaptive Narrative from a TTRPG I'm running in school. Players can come and go freely. Which makes it difficult to figure out what to do with their characters.
          	
          	My original plan was to kinda skip over it, hence why I started near the end if what should be Act 1 in the campaign. But then I remembered berserker and figured I could write up a sort of "flashback" arc kinda like the Golden Age, where everything that happened prior is explained in a prior chronological order.
          	
          	
          	But now that I think about it, I could just say the original 2 players that left were killed in action. Which could also sell the narrative of a very brutal world.
          	
          	
          	Readers, and fellow authors, if you got any insight, I'd love to hear it.

Fasterader

Hello, just wanted to come in and check how you're doing and how your stories are coming along.

Fasterader

@Untouched16 It's fine man. I mean it's just normal procrastinating. Except you don't have a deadline. No one is forcing you to write. Everyone has their own pace and their own life. I don't blame you, but notify me first of you discontinue. I am your number one fan.
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Untouched16

@Fasterader 
            
            F**king turtle pace. Like... hot damn a snail could out run me at this point.
            
            I just put a new one in. But I'll be honest, I can't keep making excuses. I have more than enough time in my days to finish school work and then write, but I do anything other than writing when its easily the most productive use of my free time that I have.
            
            That being said, I do still intent to finish these books. Regardless of how long it takes.
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Untouched16

Question regarding Welcome to Asteria. I'll be honest, I'm wondering where I can go next with this.
          
          As mentioned in the description, its an adaptive Narrative from a TTRPG I'm running in school. Players can come and go freely. Which makes it difficult to figure out what to do with their characters.
          
          My original plan was to kinda skip over it, hence why I started near the end if what should be Act 1 in the campaign. But then I remembered berserker and figured I could write up a sort of "flashback" arc kinda like the Golden Age, where everything that happened prior is explained in a prior chronological order.
          
          
          But now that I think about it, I could just say the original 2 players that left were killed in action. Which could also sell the narrative of a very brutal world.
          
          
          Readers, and fellow authors, if you got any insight, I'd love to hear it.

Untouched16

Ok, so... life update. I've been wasting most of my time doing literally anything other than writing like I used to. And I've constantly regressed into bad habits that just... eat up most of my day.
          
          Now I've got surgery coming up, which will involve an IV (I f**king hate needles.) And just so happens to be my first surgery... every. So that's gonna be all well and fun. (Glad that I won't be conscious, upset that it requires a needle to get there.)
          
          At the very least, I'll see if I can request an Ice pack for it. Find out if that helps.
          
          Aside from all of the above, I've come to note that I will be attempting to update my books as much as possible. Some chapters may feel rushed or inconsistent, maybe even unsatisfactory, but I do hope it's at least a little entertaining for you all.
          
          With that. Good evening, and God bless.

Untouched16

@Untouched16 
            
            Soon. Hopefully by next week the AC will be repaired.
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Fasterader

@Untouched16 Are you still burning alive since I don't see any new chapters.
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Untouched16

@Untouched16 Thx man. I'm good now. (The Anesthesia hit different my god) but yeah. We'll have some more chapters soon. (Preferably once the AC upstairs gets fixed and my room isn't an oven.)
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Untouched16

Little announcement for my readers. I've gotten recommendations from a friend to post my stories on other sites like AO3, so I figured I'd do that to spread out the accessibility of my books. With that in mind, I'll post my AO3 account when I make one here.
          
          I hope you all enjoy chapter 1 of Welcome To Asteria. And don't worry, I will still be continuing UnUn for the ones who are worried.
          
          Have a blessed day.

Untouched16

I'm starting to really f**king hate wattpad now.
          
          I just finished chapter 9 and got ready to publish. Couldn't publish because I wasn't logged in. So i saved, and then re-logged in to publish the chapter.
          
          The save didn't go through because I wasn't logged in.
          
          SO I GOT F**KING HOED.
          
          I'm gonna go f**king cry now. I'm tire of this BS man...

ThefaT3dDark

Ur little  nightmares boom is good keep it up

Untouched16

@0bito_Uchiha 
            
            Thanks man. I've been trying but I either get my happy @$$ distracted or have any sense of creativity die as if I blasted it away with an Evoker from Persona 3 Reload.
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ThefaT3dDark

Book
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Untouched16

Hey everyone, sorry for the delay in getting Chapter 2 for F.L.I.E out. It's taking a bit longer than expected to find out where the story goes from there, but I will hopefully have it out soon.
          
          (I say everyone, but only 30 or so people actually read this, so......)