Untrammelledgirl

Untramelledgirl,
          
          What is your plan for your story? You see, you need a concrete plan. As what the other reader said medjo lost nga si Lead Character. Kung engineer, and let's say mali ang mga measurement pihadong hindi magamda ang structure ng building. Just saying. Actually maganda ang story. By the way give the supporting character a scene hindi yung puro lead lang yung gumagawa ng lahat ng trabaho.
          
          love lots,
          Maggie

@thebackseatbookpig ahh..sige sige.. Thank You for the heads-up :)) Ayusin ko na lang sa susunod :)

Ate, try mo po kaya na wag i-bold ung thoughts ni Ellaine? Medyo distracting po kasi eh. Thank you po. :)
          

@thebackseatbookpig Chos lang yan :P

Taray ng cover ng On The Verge!! Witweew