I think the story is very touching, but i would love to see a full set of 18 chapters, hell everyone is waiting since 2022 what i would do if i was writing your book i would watch every transformers tv show on tubi to get ideas, for starters i would suggest transformers beast wars it has blackarachnia on it who is close to resemblance the spider girl, it would give me ideas on who the charecters are but in my own vision id picture the charecters from the show to the ones on prime. I too am a book reader i made a lot of books in school on my computer but sadly those days are over cuz school changed the rules...again first no youtube, then phones, and now wikipedia, and worse is teachers get the stuff we used to get, but i have a few copies because i prepare for the future of new rules wink wink try taking some things from the old transformers shows it could give you some insperation and it isnt stealing if it is already forgotten if you catch my drift
