UrGirlADHD

POEM TITLE QUESTION.
          	
          	Not telling what the poem is about cuz all the title options are really similar in meaning, but which word would most immediately make you read the poem?
          	
          	Miasma
          	Corrosion
          	Entropy
          	Veilings
          	or Undercurrent
          	
          	Please let me knowww <3

Blue_the_Bard

@UrGirlADHD Idk why but miasma grabbed me by the collar immediately 
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SunsetMercer

@UrGirlADHD Corrosion & Undercurrent are on pretty equal standing vote-wise in my eyes! <33
          	  
          	  ~Love, Lizzie
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UrGirlADHD

POEM TITLE QUESTION.
          
          Not telling what the poem is about cuz all the title options are really similar in meaning, but which word would most immediately make you read the poem?
          
          Miasma
          Corrosion
          Entropy
          Veilings
          or Undercurrent
          
          Please let me knowww <3

Blue_the_Bard

@UrGirlADHD Idk why but miasma grabbed me by the collar immediately 
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SunsetMercer

@UrGirlADHD Corrosion & Undercurrent are on pretty equal standing vote-wise in my eyes! <33
            
            ~Love, Lizzie
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UrGirlADHD

The lone girl sat staring out the window
          And silently she watched 
          
          Birds whispered with the wind,
          Wings brushing upon a cloudless sky
          And trees rippled from the pelt of rain,
          Leaves stained honey and auburn
          
          The river roared past the clearing,
          Its rush and rumble humbling
          And mountains bloomed on the horizon, 
          Frosted white even in summer
          
          Inside, glass shattered
          And she jolted to her feet
          The kitchen faucet was still running
          The steady drip loud, aggravating
          
          Dishes lay shattered on the ground 
          Her hands trembled; she picked up the pieces
          Voices voraciously rose in volume 
          The shouting was deafening, growing
          
          Louder and
          Louder and
          Louder—
          
          A deep breath in,
          Two, three—
          
          She returned to her corner,
          Sat down in the chair,
          Trembling hands now crossed on her lap
          
          And the lone girl stared out the window,
          Watching the sun set in hues of gold,
          Unsuspecting and unmoved by the storm inside
          Even as it echoed within her.
          
          
          Not sure how I feel abt this poem… should it make it into “Poetry for the Soul”? 

pranavitummarakoti

@UrGirlADHD it's very beautiful!
            I was wondering why you posted it here instead of the book itself.
            Pls do publish it.
            It's good
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UrGirlADHD

UrGirlADHD

I just wrote a poem about my ex-best best friend :(
          It’s called Expiration Date and I think a lot of people can relate 
          Even if you’ve let go of a person, it’s hard to let go of the things that remind you of them
          And that poem was intended to capture that

msun123

@UrGirlADHD :( I feel u. lately my best friend started ignoring me and the betrayal hurts. a different close friend also started talking bad abt me soooo i feel u
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pranavitummarakoti

@UrGirlADHD oh damnn
            Yep been through a friendship breakup 
            And ik how it feels to lose a best friend
            Cause betryal comes from the close ones
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