Urban_Helpers

Been slacking on checking my girl book out. It's giving me life. 
          	
          	Ya'll check out my girl @SavvyImagination books. She too much. If I could I would have given her books about a thousand votes. She one of the real deal.

DezzyDez96

Hi I would like to know if you can critique my story  Treat Me Like Somebody 

Urban_Helpers

@DezzyDez96  check our girl @dahinaspence  short story.
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Urban_Helpers

check our girl @DahinaSpence story Because You Love Me, then we can critique ya'll story.

Urban_Helpers

@chaterboxxx Thanks boo appreciate it. lol
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chaterboxxx

@Urban_Helpers only because you asked so nicely lol
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itskamay

hey can you check out my story, and can you shout it out and for please critique it. I Got You. Description below.
          
          I Got You, is a story about the single-mother, twenty-two year old Amelia Martinez. She gets discovered by the famous J. Cole, getting signed under Sony Music Entertainment record label. Amelia has a beautiful one year old daughter named Chastity Maliah Martinez. Chastity has no father, he left Amelia right after she gave birth to Chastity; and this sorry excuse of a man named is "Jaylow". What happens when Amelia get famous and he tries to be in their daughter life then. When Amelia gets fame stuck in her head, who would be the one to bring her back to reality? What happens when she starts "seeing" or so called "dating", J. Cole. Would Amelia still be the same girl she was? With two best friends and family behind her back, will anything be able to knock Amelia down?