Utheniniel
Okay, so chapters 1 and 2 have been reposted. I still apparently need to change the perspectives of the other chapters, so they'll be posted shortly.
Utheniniel
Utheniniel
I am officially starting to repost the edited version of Damaged., It will all be found in the original post, so feel free to go back and reread. Or don't. Its certainly been a while.
Utheniniel
So,,, Hey y'all, it's been a bit. While I haven't written anything adding onto my stories, I've rewritten Damanged and Demon Inside. Changed minorish details, but overall there's more detail as well as grammar and spelling is fixed. If I posted it, would anyone still be interested..? Is anyone still on here..? XD
2003maygirl
Please update damaged! It's so amazing! I couldn't stop reading!
Utheniniel
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Uh, hey guys me again. So I'm in my second year of high school, and really striving to excel this year, which leave little to no time for me to write anything. At the moment it seems like Damaged will be more of a summer update. Then I can hopefully update it in a schedule (something I've never really done) and keep everyone happy! Now, this is the moment I ask for your opinion. Guys I get that a lot of you like the story, I read every comment I get (and usually respond), but please give me actual feedback! I can't stress that enough. My work included! I go for editing and people give me no feedback! Even when I spell things horribly wrong! You're not being rude, I won't be offended. Hell, tell me my whole plot line suddenly took a turn to fuck-up-ville, as long as you tell me where I would love it!(cause if you didn't I'd probably go crazy tearing the whole story apart.) 1 piece of Constructive criticism is better than all the praise I get. (Cause my story's aren't good! I'm not being modest! They are written and posted to get feedback so I can be a better writer!) If you made it through my rant, it's greatly appreciated.
AngelCakeszee
@Utheniniel I actually forgot about this comment, lol. But I honestly don't mind helping.
Utheniniel
@AngelCakeszee if you wanted you could hit me up in a private chat! I'll take any form of help friend!
AngelCakeszee
@Utheniniel I don't mind rereading it and putting down some constructive criticism. I'm just afraid that people will take me as rude and I don't mean the author. I mean the other readers. They can get pretty mean when I see other people try to give the author some constructive criticism.
Utheniniel
I really think I want to rewrite Damaged... My writing has improved since I first started this account, and I feel like it would be a good way for me to get back into the creative flow of it and give it new life! So uh... Any thoughts? (There solos the matter of me simply editing the chapters, or starting a New story and keeping the old one kind of there.) so tell me what you guys think!
AngelCakeszee
@Utheniniel It would be awesoms if you do continue the story. Because I really liked the book. But you can rewrite it if you want.
Utheniniel
ALRIGHT! So, I wanted to remind you all I have a one shot book. That requires I out from YOU all. Give me AU's Prompts, he'll alter net versions of my stories you wish had happened! (Just keep it somewhat shortish..) preferably not a lot of shipping. I don't know romance, and never experienced it myself making it hard to know. Also, it is a NOT just a Yogscast book. Any fandom you see in my description I will be able to write about! So go nuts!
Utheniniel
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Holy shit I can write my status with my IPad! I didn't know How, or even if I could with my IPod.
_Crazy_individual
I have returned in search of good fics, and so my trail lead me here, fair maiden!
Utheniniel
@Canadian_Goggles ....I apologize there is not. None of my story's are finished, and school is continuing to be a challenge for me making it hard to have any sort of scheduling. Damaged will hopefully be updated soon, don't worry!