I was thinking of rewriting Shark Attack. Dropped the idea.. but it
is still in the back of my mind? So I started rewriting it from scratch. I've got two chapters down for the rewrite.. but the thing is, would you guys be willing to accept the (minor and not minor) changes? For example, Jenny isn't the one who shoots Violet, there is more backstory, etc? Plus, some more focus on characters like Karen, Cindy, Brandon, Vienna, and Vy? I feel like they haven't gotten as much "screen time" as I wanted them too.
Plus, I also want to change some personalities.. they all seem to have very similar ones.. I sort of want to tweak them a little. I think Cindy is the one who as a different personality than the others.. Violet had a really.. impatient and nice personality.. but then the next chapter or so she turns really cold? I think I could have done better.
Also, I want to make longer chapters and not rush things as much as I did. I also forgot about some things.. like how in chapter 1 Violet mentions bringing her fishing rod.. but we never see it again.. And I don't like how chapter 6 turned out..
Anyways, should I rewrite Shark Attack? If so, should I complete this version, and then start the rewrite? I'd like your opinions on this.