V1OLATTE

bye im so embarrassed my old stuff here is so HSKGIDUARONUDSVAGRSPNUHOURGNS0TGFIR0 sg

V1OLATTE

Woo hoo! Shark Attack- Rewrite has officially left the docks! :D https://www.wattpad.com/story/167904859

Ghoose

@ceruleanstream o dang that's kcrispy
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AWayToProcrastinate

*applause* that’s a good joke
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V1OLATTE

I wanna launch Shark Attack's rewrite /so/ bad right now but I can'ttttttthgfadfcsdin;inhsinvd;giywcebrv;digya
          
          instead I'm drowning myself in adorable videos like yuzu and Misha and boyang and jun-hwan and shoma racing after the pyeongchang olympicsssssssss
          
          ALSO, GET WELL SOON YUZU! Hope you get to participate (and win) the GPF, but health comes first! <3

partiallysolved

oi pls get a twitter : )
          and you have a tumblr and pintrest? seriously though, PINTREST!
          three reactions:
          yU gRaNnNy
          as expected from granny
          OMG WOW YOU HAVE A PINTREST! GRANNY KNOWS HOW TO USE INTERNET!

V1OLATTE

and now I got a twitter
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V1OLATTE

yeah I have Pinterest and Tumblr
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V1OLATTE

I was thinking of rewriting Shark Attack. Dropped the idea.. but it
          is still in the back of my mind? So I started rewriting it from scratch. I've got two chapters down for the rewrite.. but the thing is, would you guys be willing to accept the (minor and not minor) changes? For example, Jenny isn't the one who shoots Violet, there is more backstory, etc? Plus, some more focus on characters like Karen, Cindy, Brandon, Vienna, and Vy? I feel like they haven't gotten as much "screen time" as I wanted them too. 
          
          Plus, I also want to change some personalities.. they all seem to have very similar ones.. I sort of want to tweak them a little. I think Cindy is the one who as a different personality than the others.. Violet had a really.. impatient and nice personality.. but then the next chapter or so she turns really cold? I think I could have done better. 
          
          Also, I want to make longer chapters and not rush things as much as I did. I also forgot about some things.. like how in chapter 1 Violet mentions bringing her fishing rod.. but we never see it again.. And I don't like how chapter 6 turned out..
          
          Anyways, should I rewrite Shark Attack? If so, should I complete this version, and then start the rewrite? I'd like your opinions on this.

partiallysolved

i think you should rewrite it and yes wait until this version is finished pls
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