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I JUST WATCHED DEVILMAN CRYBABY IM GOING TO BAWL MY EYES OUT

bitterporridge

bro. genuinely, from the bottom of my heart, thank you for reading my book. i made it on a whim for fun, but i can’t thank you and everyone else enough for pouring so much love into this passion project. words can’t even describe how much your comments uplift me. i hope you have an amazing day :D

V4MPIIRE_

@bitterporridge  ITS LIT SO GOOD LIKE WHY ARE YOU EVEN ☝️ I LOVE THE FIC I HOPE U UPDATE SOON1!!11
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puresoul0102

May be now you can ❤
          
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/370243160?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=puresoul0102

puresoul0102

Thank you
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puresoul0102

@puresoul0102 sure ❤❤
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V4MPIIRE_

@puresoul0102 (not that you aren't a good writter right now)
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puresoul0102

Could you please help me with my first writing can you tell is it OK or do I need to improve it
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/369986862?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=puresoul0102
          
          Love you writing style❤

puresoul0102

@puresoul0102 Thank you so much for your thoughtful and detailed feedback on my book. I really appreciate your honesty and suggestions, which will definitely help me improve my writing.
            I'm glad you enjoyed the school theme and the characters. I'll keep working on developing the plot and characters to make the story even more engaging.Thank you again for your feedback. I hope it didn't come across as mean, and I appreciate your willingness to help me improve my writing.
            
            Thank you ❤
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@puresoul0102  I LOVE THE TOPICC
            Firstly, i think you should look more into what type of fanfiction you are looking for for your book, like slowburn, enemies to lovers, strangers to lovers, nerd x jock, etc 
            You have a great vocabulary and choice of words, however you dont explain enoughly the topics and there are a few missing plots, like in the start of the book. Try to, for example, firstly explain the backgroung of the character and her enviroment and the characters, then you can start the plot of the story.
            Last thing, but this is optional, create more paragraphs: the book appears more organized and "easier" to read. 
            You have a great plot and characters, the school theme is classic but i like it very much‍♀️
            For your first book you have started of great, not gonna liee
            I hope i didnt sound mean by these tips too
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@puresoul0102  WHATT MINE? 
            thats so cute tbh finna read it
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