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https://www.wattpad.com/story/331639500-fragile-heart

deuklili__

Hey! Sorry if I disturbed you. Hope you are well. Just wanted to ask if you would be so kind as to take a look at my story. It's drarry so totally okay if not your cup of tea. Thanks again!
          
          The link:
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/341121776?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=deuklili__&wp_originator=ctTjRA3OYb52fJduIJzPzv92b0W%2Bx8Q4t0JYFURMDVQ%2FvkFX8cfaABIkWjRxAzpkfoKuAmgNcxDx3PrzJwPzEnlI5LqAsLK84tz5WI%2FF6xu3ZLUgo6TkyqmQ5xkRAmKR

VAVANxBORIVictorious

@deuklili__  i plan on reading your story, but please also check out this recommendation.
            https://www.wattpad.com/story/312519875-kila
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AnointingYao

Hey darling... Welcome to Wattpad. A cruelly wonderful world. I read your story description and i was amazed with the fact that the whole plot was summarized in the story description. It spoilt the fun for me. There was no need reading the book for the whole book was already written in the story description (BLURB)
          
          I know that you're looking for reads and votes but to be honest with you, that book wouldn't get the votes ND reads it deserves if you keep spoiling your own book for us in the Blurb. 
             I'd advise you to read how to become a better writers(Writing tips) which a more than many on Wattpad to grow your writing. It would really help you. You have the passion and the will. It remains the skills and the reads. They'd come. But you need to work on it from ur side. 
          
          I wish you a happy journey on Wattpad. I hope you continue to have pleasants experiences ❤️

AnointingYao

@VAVANxBORIVictorious I'm glad it helped love
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VAVANxBORIVictorious

@AnointingYao THANKYOU SO MUCH!!! This helps so much. I really appreciate it <<<
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