Far from money

Imagine Being a Faker -> Anti-god odyssey

I rewrote or corrected some chapters I invite you to re read because they will be canon to the actual story and not the old ones.
          
          Cydron-> Eralis
          
          Angela
          
          Better dialogue and storytelling.

What do you think about these flashbacks integrated in the story? Too long? Take too much time? Useless?

Announcement: Uris will have his own book telling his story.
          The flashback of Godverse will be resumed and a book will be written to explain it more in detail.
          I will rewrite Kingverse books when I have the time and the determination as I am not convinced and satisfied at all.
          Guess who is the Creature imprisoned in the Core of the Main Omniverse (chapter 27). If you get it right I failed my story or I succeeded in the hints given.

If anyone sees this, which one do you prefer in terms of writing?
          
          Kingverse Book 1 or Imagine being a Faker?
          
          Knowing that Book one was my first attempt and I didn't really calculate the amount of patience someone has during reading.

What you all think about my writing style?