VHSenjoyer

Last breath update when? Also is the story of last breath gonna reach where other au will be involved just asking because there has been no last breath story that include him interact on the other au's

I would like some critics, i have been quite irregularly writing my last story chapter, that's true it's not about that, i want an honest opinion about my writing style, good points, bad points, both, i just want to have something to work on.

Also passing to 2 chapters a day, it makes the things easier for my head to get wider ideas going above what i would do as i forget half my things when i only write one, ending up with a different yet satisfying result that changes how i want the story to turn but in a good way.

As you may know, i write both LB: Rewritten and Prophecies heroes in alternate, should i just focus on prophecies heroes or keep it this way?

Hey, sorry for posting it here but do try to read this story and vote comments 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/361296793?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=WhiteBird32

MY SCHOOL STARTING ON THE 20TH HELP
          Also any tips for highschool 10th grade?

Hello @VHSenjoyer 

Imagine Being a Faker -> Anti-god odyssey

I rewrote or corrected some chapters I invite you to re read because they will be canon to the actual story and not the old ones.
          
          Cydron-> Eralis
          
          Angela
          
          Better dialogue and storytelling.

What do you think about these flashbacks integrated in the story? Too long? Take too much time? Useless?