Titan_Tvman_0782
Heya
VHSenjoyer
@ Titan_Tvman_0782 Taking years to answer but yeah I am good (exams week finally ended, I am free).
VHSenjoyer
Warfish127
Last breath update when? Also is the story of last breath gonna reach where other au will be involved just asking because there has been no last breath story that include him interact on the other au's
VHSenjoyer
@Warfish127 Also if you want to try something new, my story Prohecies heries could interest you. But for Last breath rewritten i am going to push myself to do it as i really like it.
VHSenjoyer
@Warfish127 I would prefer not in this story specifically as i really want to rewrite the AU in an original way with Gaster's mysterious abilities. But after i would, don't have any idea on how to make it balanced tho, I hate Op for no reason OC's.
VHSenjoyer
I would like some critics, i have been quite irregularly writing my last story chapter, that's true it's not about that, i want an honest opinion about my writing style, good points, bad points, both, i just want to have something to work on.
VHSenjoyer
Also passing to 2 chapters a day, it makes the things easier for my head to get wider ideas going above what i would do as i forget half my things when i only write one, ending up with a different yet satisfying result that changes how i want the story to turn but in a good way.
VHSenjoyer
As you may know, i write both LB: Rewritten and Prophecies heroes in alternate, should i just focus on prophecies heroes or keep it this way?
KhushbooSh123
Hey, sorry for posting it here but do try to read this story and vote comments
https://www.wattpad.com/story/361296793?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=WhiteBird32
VHSenjoyer
@KhushbooSh123 OK but only if i think it's worthy of it, by the way do i attract indian people?
Jakeyessir
MY SCHOOL STARTING ON THE 20TH HELP
Also any tips for highschool 10th grade?
VHSenjoyer
@Jakeyessir You have oral exams? Dont panis it' easy, you have written one? Bro you are ooked if you don't take the 6 pages and fill them
Titan_Tvman_0782
Hello @VHSenjoyer
VHSenjoyer
Imagine Being a Faker -> Anti-god odyssey
VHSenjoyer
I rewrote or corrected some chapters I invite you to re read because they will be canon to the actual story and not the old ones.
Cydron-> Eralis
Angela
Better dialogue and storytelling.