I would like some critics, i have been quite irregularly writing my last story chapter, that's true it's not about that, i want an honest opinion about my writing style, good points, bad points, both, i just want to have something to work on.
@VHSenjoyer thing is,be prepared to see a Book Full Of Thing's I Myself Am Making Plus It's Just A Remaster Of The Old One I Made A Long Time Ago In 2024
Last breath update when? Also is the story of last breath gonna reach where other au will be involved just asking because there has been no last breath story that include him interact on the other au's
@Warfish127 Also if you want to try something new, my story Prohecies heries could interest you. But for Last breath rewritten i am going to push myself to do it as i really like it.
@Warfish127 I would prefer not in this story specifically as i really want to rewrite the AU in an original way with Gaster's mysterious abilities. But after i would, don't have any idea on how to make it balanced tho, I hate Op for no reason OC's.
I would like some critics, i have been quite irregularly writing my last story chapter, that's true it's not about that, i want an honest opinion about my writing style, good points, bad points, both, i just want to have something to work on.
Also passing to 2 chapters a day, it makes the things easier for my head to get wider ideas going above what i would do as i forget half my things when i only write one, ending up with a different yet satisfying result that changes how i want the story to turn but in a good way.