Read two of your books. You’re honestly a great writer and you have good story lines. But everything felt so repetitive In both books, and honestly I don’t mean that with wrong intentions. Just some advice from a readers point
An example is on the new book, it felt like most conversations dayvon & Deja were having was just her constantly asking the same questions in every chapter
@Yoe_123 Thank You, I have new books coming and i promise they wont be like the two you read and thank you for your advice your the first person to say something!!!♥️