VOrtiz13

I have posted two chapters now of “The lost one”. Give it a read and share with friends. 
          	
          	Much love V.M

VOrtiz13

I am thinking on re-writing the second book cause idk it really doesn’t make any sense. To be honest I just wrote whatever came to my mind and I really didn’t think about it. So I’m gonna re write The Lost One again. 

VOrtiz13

I know I don’t have much readers. And my first books really don’t help cause I write them when I was 16, unexperienced (still am) and I did it in a rush. But I have to take my time with this third book because it sets things for the next two books. Yes the next TWO books and honestly I can’t wait for those who are sticking around to read them. 

VOrtiz13

Yo it’s been a while mostly cause I’m lazy and I forget to write a chapter and when I do I either I add a few sentences or edit the chapter and not post it. But I’m gonna change that so please leave any feedback on things I need to work on. I’m not an expert writer as most of you can see. So any feedback on my writing and how I can be better at it would help out a lot. Thank you.

VOrtiz13

If your reading the first books of 'The Darkest Secrets' series I promise the the third book is much better. You can obviously notice that in the first book I was a newbie. I literally wrote the first three or so chapters past midnight. So just a heads up the third book is a bit more violent.