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@Cobraki I'd say give a more ominous summary, telling less of what happens in his old life, and tells, in a mysterious way, what happens in the next world.

@Cobraki It's mostly just me; it's not...unique, I should say. I've been reading fanfics and stories of the lowest and most amazing  qualities, and that summary gives me the impression of a cliche fic with an edgy protagonist and no moral standard, and more improtantly: a Marry Sue/Garry Stu. 
            
            Now, I don't know if that's the case here-I'll start reading in a few minutes-, but to those like me who have seen stories with summaries like enough, and read enough of them, it sounds boring. (also, is it a WoF fanfic, or an original, or something else?)
            
            Other than my personal experience and tastes, there's not really a lot wrong with the summary; other than that it tells a bit too much, giving no real reason to read the prologue.

@Cobraki is there a suggestion of how to spark an interest. I like suggestions.