Valenrick

Hi everyone :D
          	I would really appreciate it if you can find the time to check on this recent piece that I'm working on. I have already posted the prologue and I was hoping if you can probably give me some insights on my story. Yeah, I know you won't probably get much information on my story just on the prologue but I would really appreciate any insights you may offer.
          	Btw the story is entitle The Nordrae Circle: Zodiac Secrets. I'm still working on the Cover art so I just left it blank.
          	Again, please find the time to check on it and tell me what you think.
          	Thanks in advance guys.

Valenrick

Hi everyone :D
          I would really appreciate it if you can find the time to check on this recent piece that I'm working on. I have already posted the prologue and I was hoping if you can probably give me some insights on my story. Yeah, I know you won't probably get much information on my story just on the prologue but I would really appreciate any insights you may offer.
          Btw the story is entitle The Nordrae Circle: Zodiac Secrets. I'm still working on the Cover art so I just left it blank.
          Again, please find the time to check on it and tell me what you think.
          Thanks in advance guys.