Valentina Nightshade

You’re welcome! I hope you like my story. Or at least leave comments until you don’t like it anymore. 

I guess I’ll continue to vote for as many chapters of yours as you vote for mine. I only have 1 story posted, not 5, and my story is currently 44 chapters. so I will never have as much content to beg support as you have. But we’ll see how it goes 

Okay! Let’s!! 

I would rather be told exactly what works and what doesn’t, and why or any idea how to fix it than to be praised endlessly or kept at bay by vague platitudes or the short OOH! AHH! EEK! 
            
            Granted, in a first read thru, I also drop an endless supply of emojis and OOHs and AHAs! but I know I could do better with my criticism too!
            
            I’m sorry my prologue is so short compared to yours. Trust me, more than a few of my chapters make up for the brevity of my prologue. May the odds be ever in your favor if you decide to continue reading IRON TALONS

I love the opening chapters so far. I love how great at vividly describing the setting as well as the characters emotions, especially in a moment of suspense. Having multiple perspectives does work well and i followed along without struggle. I cant wait to read the next part. 

I would be equally grateful for any feedback you might offer to my work. Especially the opening chapters I’ve posted, just to let me know if or when it falls off the rails so that I might better structure the beast for future readers 

@ValentinaNightshade that’s awesome!! I’m rooting for you then! Set that keyboard on fire ^^

@Elenue it is a good day! I’m writing and rewriting like the wind today!

@ValentinaNightshade hope you’re having a wonderful day out there!