@ValentinaNightshade
Ok. So I have completed another full draft revision which chopped up the 44 chapters into 75 smaller bites, 136,650 words.
I know none of my readers have survived past Chapter 15 or 18 of the current draft, but just so my 3 readers are aware, I’ll probably be dropping the newly revised chapters into the current draft which will disconnect all previous comments from their sign posts.
Sorry y’all
Not sorry
You didn’t enjoy my story… :-/
You’re welcome! Enjoy my story!!
Good morning
Are you up for a VtV RtR ?
Where are my … 3… readers at??
I miss you!!
No worries. I was just vibing good for a few days between my few readers, feeding of R4R + C4C then it just stops. So I assume it’s my writing that went wrong some how…
@ValentinaNightshade lol sorry. I said read for read but that implies that I"ve been writing and at the moment, I'm trying to solve a problem that is vexing me. However, if you want, you can switch to my first book and I will use that instead as a read for read. It's the matriarch's daughter.
Omg thanks a lot for the comments and taking your time reading the story of Nick and Eddie
I really appreciate it
I'll read yours ASAP
You’re welcome! I hope you like my story. Or at least leave comments until you don’t like it anymore.
Thank you
I guess I’ll continue to vote for as many chapters of yours as you vote for mine. I only have 1 story posted, not 5, and my story is currently 44 chapters. so I will never have as much content to beg support as you have. But we’ll see how it goes
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This was great, I appreciate it. It actually helps me assess how I can help you. I was worried I might come across as too strong, so I was careful with what I'd advise. When I do chapter 1, I'll be more candid.
I would rather be told exactly what works and what doesn’t, and why or any idea how to fix it than to be praised endlessly or kept at bay by vague platitudes or the short OOH! AHH! EEK!
Granted, in a first read thru, I also drop an endless supply of emojis and OOHs and AHAs! but I know I could do better with my criticism too!
I’m sorry my prologue is so short compared to yours. Trust me, more than a few of my chapters make up for the brevity of my prologue. May the odds be ever in your favor if you decide to continue reading IRON TALONS
Thank you for following me. I would be so grateful if you could give my work some feedback.
I love the opening chapters so far. I love how great at vividly describing the setting as well as the characters emotions, especially in a moment of suspense. Having multiple perspectives does work well and i followed along without struggle. I cant wait to read the next part.
I would be equally grateful for any feedback you might offer to my work. Especially the opening chapters I’ve posted, just to let me know if or when it falls off the rails so that I might better structure the beast for future readers