Hey there I've started a new story on wattpad called Tin heart, but as I'm only just starting out I am in need of major constructive critism, i adore your writing style and have fallen i love with the way you maniplute your words to convey emotion on many different levels. I was therefore wondering if you could check it out and comment some much needed feedback. I would really appreciate it, but don't worry if you don't have time.