Valveri3

ZoroslilPrincess

Hey Valveri, I was wondering if you would like to mutually read each others story and give feedback/comment etc. 
          My story is based on One piece - dont know if you follow anime. And it has mature content. If you are underage - PLEASE IGNORE this message. 
          Byeeeee

ZoroslilPrincess

@Valveri3 Hey thanks for the feedback...ill consider it...but I have the story planned already with a different twist. They will end at opposite ends..but not in the way you requested.
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Valveri3

@ZoroslilPrincess it's decent but I think it would be better if Anya and Zoro's relationship is slowburn. When it comes to the secret tribe, I would want Zoro to be a danger to Anya's tribe so that Anya needs to assassinate him. And Anya's tribe pressuring her day by day through messages or whatever. 
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