Dark-Beauty

Hey, I was wondering if you could read my first attempt on a Greek story. I decided to write about something new on wattpad instead of another vampire story even though we all love them (although it does include them but in a totally different context) I would love some feedback, criticisms welcome 
          
          It’s called: Me, The Reincarnated Greek Goddess Of Love Is On The Run From Zeus With A Annoying Sprite As My Sidekick 
          
          Cassie has watched the entrapment of her mother before her eyes from the very people she lives with…Greek Gods. Since that night, a lot has changed; she finds out that she is the reincarnated Greek goddess Aphrodite who is now on the run from the most powerful being…. Zeus. Aphrodite is the Greek god of love and a romance unfolds whilst her run from Zeus. She discovers many powers that endanger her at some points but she is Aphrodite, she somehow comes out of it unscathed. She is trying to go against the written prophecy, but will she leave the hands of her beloved citizens of an entirely different kingdom all to the rising darkness?
          
          
          Can you also read a poem I recently wrote for Haiti, Your feedback would be much appreciated?

moongazerkai07

hi there, i was just wondering if you have the spare time to read on my story entitled SCARLET MIDNIGHT. i would greatly appreciate it if you could comment or critic on the chapters. i am still trying to improve my writing and its my first try on writing a story. thanks and have a good day

ann_o_nemos

Could you read my newest story? “I’m Body Guarding the President’s Jerk Son…Who is HOT! FML”. Comment and vote plz!
          
          Carly Dupont is not a normal seventeen-year-old girl. She works for her dad in his freelance organization called COBRA as a bodyguard. She trains hard and shuts everyone out of her world. After her mom’s death years ago, she’s never let anyone else in. 
          
          Her training is complete and her dad sends her off to be the bodyguard to the President’s son. She hasn’t seen him since she was seven, and like any jerk, he used to torment her with petty little tricks. But now she’s back and she’s stronger, faster, better.
          
          Yet he still has the inexplicable ability to make her feel like the weak little girl she used to be. Could he be the one to break her invisible wall?
          
          Welcome to her world of fists, politicians, assassins, high school, and even possible romance.