Vamplixz

So, I have planned to rewrite the starting Chapters of my book "Till My Last Breath" and because of that, there won't be a new chapter for a while. Don't forget to check out the rewritten chapters and comment your opinions.

Vamplixz

@PIKANINJA69 sure bro but I'm in a tight schedule irl but ye a new chapter would be coming out in 2/3 days
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PIKANINJA69

@ComboBrickBattlee today I will start reading your book just requesting please dont discontinue the book in future it hurts when you like a book story and it gets discontinued. That's why I mostly read completed books and not ongoing ones but I like your books description so I will give it a shot . Take as much time as you need just dont discontinue the book. Thank You
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Vamplixz

So, I have planned to rewrite the starting Chapters of my book "Till My Last Breath" and because of that, there won't be a new chapter for a while. Don't forget to check out the rewritten chapters and comment your opinions.

Vamplixz

@PIKANINJA69 sure bro but I'm in a tight schedule irl but ye a new chapter would be coming out in 2/3 days
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PIKANINJA69

@ComboBrickBattlee today I will start reading your book just requesting please dont discontinue the book in future it hurts when you like a book story and it gets discontinued. That's why I mostly read completed books and not ongoing ones but I like your books description so I will give it a shot . Take as much time as you need just dont discontinue the book. Thank You
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Vamplixz

ngl, Amourshipping high-school stories are kinda overrated.

Vamplixz

Ye I agree with you. Most high school stories feel repeated 
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Haruka_303

@ComboBrickBattlee though to be honest i do miss the nostalgia. i just wish theyd have a more unique story line to them.
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Vamplixz

Ngl, but I personally think that the new Pokemon Season is better than S&M and Journeys. I'm Impressed Pokemon.

_Scorpion07_

@ComboBrickBattlee yes, it's literalmente for that
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Vamplixz

I'm sure Captain Pikachu is in the series just as a merch tool as Pikachu is the main pokemon of the pokemon company a.k.a the mascot.
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Shadow_Lust

Bro. I wanna say something. Please don't feel offended okay? Just an advice as a fellow amourshipper. I have read your story. And it's very nice. I have only one problem with this story. And that is the name. Bro the name "Never without you my darling" it's a little too cringe bro (^_^メ) i mean the story is fun but that name is.. umm alright if you wanna go on with that only but it's just my opinion that maybe you can give a better name. That is more catchy you know. Even the name and bio of a story matters alot in gaining readers. Hope you update soon. 

Vamplixz

@Zyraxeus_ hmm till my last breath sounds good
            thanks for the suggestion man
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Shadow_Lust

@ComboBrickBattlee i need to think about it umm.. uhh.. like you can use "Till my Last breath" that's sounds catchy as well. Then we have "Lost in love" then there's "path to conquer" or "war of life"(use this one only if you got some dark stuff ahead in story) then we got "The power of US" and "Story of the Unheard" 
            
            These are some examples of the names you can use
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Vamplixz

@Zyraxeus_ thank you for the advice man
            if u don't mind suggest any title it would help me a lot
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Vamplixz

Well, I Just finished watching JN 105 (ik I'm like 2 late to watch it) and I have to say
          I just fell in love with the episode.
          Journeys did an excellent job constructing this episode by factors like Helping both Koharu and Eevee discover another site of themself and I think the best one distracting Ash from meeting Serena during the contest and Reuniting them in the final minutes of the episode and showing us a matured and confident Serena. IDK why but I feel this episode was just the beginning of Serena's return and in the future, there will be a whole episode dedicated to ash and Serena's reunion. there is one thing I'm sad about and that is JN could have perfected are the returns of dawn in all of the episodes she returned, like come on it wasn't perfect at all she has been overshadowed in most of the episodes, eg her return in the arecus era was overshadowed by the return of brock etc. as proof in the last anipoke voting dawn's last time's vote was decrease by 300/400 while Serena's increased by 100/50. I'm happy that Serena reigns supreme but sad for dawn's lost votes. overall the return of Serena was perfect and ya this month is for XY fans. see ya soon guys (Edited)

Vamplixz

idk y but Pokemon hate us because only one return from the last 2 seasons. meanwhile, most pokemon companions had 2 or more.
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