VanessaMcKinley9

Hope people read my story

Some_Emo_Guy

Hello. I came across your profile and ended up looking at your Ben 10 story. 
          I have my own My Hero Academia story, and I just wanted to ask if you would like some advice to improve your story?

VanessaMcKinley9

Thanks for being nice and encouraging I am just in my double digits, grammar is my downfall in School . I appreciate you give me some advice and what I should work on thanks
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Some_Emo_Guy

Well, I can’t help but notice how your writing style actually improves as you get to the third chapter. That’s a good thing. But with all due respect, your spelling and grammar needs work to really make it easier to read and understand. 
            
            I mean this as nicely as possible, but is English your primary language? Because I know that can be a major reason, if not.
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VanessaMcKinley9

Thanks for looking at my story. What advice do you think you could give me?
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