Norikon2
I was reading your story The King's Blind Falcon it's intense and emotional but it feels very fast and focused more on desire than feelings and choice.
I also have some questions for you, do you think the story would be stronger if Catriona had more time to decide and express her own wishes?
VanessaSosa
Thanks for the message, glad you like the story. I the story, Catriona’s father ordered her to go to a convent because he doesn’t want to pay another dowry for a daughter, he has five daughters and a son. Catriona doesn’t want to be a nun, she feels being with Harald is the better alternative since she does want to marry and have children. As for Harald, he hasn’t been interested in women since his wife died but he needs a male heir, Catriona is the first woman he’s been interested in for years. It’s going to be more like marriage before romance on her side, she feels being married to Harald is much better than being a nun
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