Vanessa

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Dear Vanessa,
          Though cliff-hangers and quite in trend these days of sequel writing, I personally feel that an ending of a book cannot be incompatible with the character. 
          NEAS has a heroine that while never wanting to be a hero does not hold back when the right thing to do is clear to her. Is it how you see her too? Because if that is the case, no amount of surprise or heartbreak would break her for long and thus the current ending of the book cannot be a proper ending no matter how satisfactory it might feel.
          If the point is that nobody is perfect that is cool. But nobody is imperfect in what is his/ her core trait. There are so many things in life one can screw up. And usually you fail what you strive to manage not what spills out of your soul without you wanting too.
          So, basically what I am saying is that -while a great piece of writing  - NEAS with that ending is not an actual book. At best it might be a part I of something.
          I like your writing and I like some darkness in the mood of a book. While your world is dark enough, the disappointment from the heroine feels forced. One should not strive to lead a character where the character does not wish to go, and certainly one should not sentence a character to a permanent state of being out of character. The world, yours and the one we share alike, is hard and unfair enough as it is. Does not need us to forcefully twist it that way any more than it already is.
          With great hopes for you and a full book of yours,
          Orin 
          the grumpy old dwarf.

I am trash.

Maybe I don't want to be a writer.

I am seriously considering deleting Not Exactly Prince Charming...

Hi, so, this one is for my PJO fanfiction readers, just to let you know that if you've already read CH 6 then you should probably get to it again. There was an error which I explain at the end in the A/N that I added (because again, if you've already read it, it would have not been there). So that way you can actually read the whole chapter as I intended to publish it. And that's all. So. 
          
          Thanks for reading, hope none of your favorite characters die!

A man is allowed to remain in the fire, in the hopes that when he finally gets out, he is able to pull out another hundred men after him.

So maybe my stories aren't in the Popular section but that is perfectly fine by me because:
          1. Popular does not necessarily mean good.
          2. I know it is simply because they're not sappy love stories involving hot guys and sarcasm.
          3. These are the stories I want to tell, even if they are not the ones everyone on Wattpad wants to read.

Extremely sorry for the delay on all my stories. It's just, life is super busy now with school (3 subjects are based on math, one of them is learning the components of a computer- inside- and their functions and another is extremely tedious), social service, homework, chores and trying to sleep.
          
          I am trying to write but I usually did that instead of sleeping but I really need to sleep at night so I can concentrate in school because I really want to raise my GPA (as you may call it). It's not bad now actually but I know it can be better so... sorry again. And just know I'm trying.
          
          PS
          NEAS got to 8k! What?

Extremely sorry for the delay on all my stories. It's just, life is super busy now with school (3 subjects are based on math, one of them is learning the components of a computer- inside- and their functions and another is extremely tedious), social service, homework, chores and trying to sleep.
          
          I am trying to write but I usually did that instead of sleeping but I really need to sleep at night so I can concentrate in school because I really want to raise my GPA (as you may call it). It's not bad now actually but I know it can be better so... sorry again. And just know I'm trying.
          
          PS
          NEAS got to 8k! What?