@ wilwinterswrites
Hi Will,
I started reading your work and I really like your ideas and how you structure your writing, you're an incredibly talented writer, keep going :)
I'd suggest maybe adding the meaning of some Australian words that you use, if you think they'll be too difficult to understand for some readers, but overall it wasn't hard to deduce their meaning and it didn't slow down the reading or anything.
And wow, you studied computer science? That's amazing! I'm intending to study it too in the future, I'll reach out to you if I need anything.
Have a good day :3
Vanessa.