I love anything fantasy with dragons, elves, magic, mages ..... you get the picture.  I was pleasantly surprised to read some very good stories here on Wattpad.  Now I've decided to write something of my own for my five year old son to read when He is a little bit older.  Hopefully he will come to enjoy fantasy as much or more than his father.  

Anyone with time to give constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated.


I can say, so far, it has been really exciting when I figure out how to make something fit and its been really frustrating when I've run up against the proverbial block wall so to speak.  I guess that's what writing is all about.  For those of you that I have had conversations with, thank you for the encouragement.

Happy Writing