Vardaman

@Tessie2004 Oh, yeah of course! Like I said to ladyalastair, I might not see stuff on my message board so it's better that you PM me in the future. But yes, I'll for sure get to your story.
          

@ladyalastair Sure, I'd love to! In the future it's probably better that you PM me, as I almost didn't notice this.

Could you check out and critique my story: DYSANIA? I haven't written much yet (only three parts, as you mentioned you preferred shorter works). Feel free to be as harsh as you'd like with the critiques, I don't mind!