Alright, alright superfantastic beings. Anyone's who's waiting for the next chapter of Moon Tanning just got their wish. This weekend, in honor of Halloween, I'll be adding another one or two. Thanks for staying loyal this entire time; thanks for waiting (:
@MajaRatkovic well first, I.went ahead and read it anyway (: Now I'm not exactly an expert but I do have a few tips like... Your story was good. The idea and everything was there, although you could use a tad more help on the actual conventions. I thought the story began too a quickly in a way, although it wasnt terrible. You can do something with your ideas.... And what's your native tongue? :o
@VashyKent Oh yeah, I have acouple new ones up, and I kinda tried something different with the one, 'Rewind'. If you read it you'll see what I mean, and if you do let me know if it's too confusing. Anyhow, yay! I'm super excited. :)
@laurasaur Ohmygosh, I noticed! I was like how did my votes go up so much ?! :o Haha, but thanks a lot a lot. I'll write more, just for you :D And yup. You do poems, I do stories. We've got this on lock :3
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