VectorRain

I've split my first two chapters into four, if this new structure proves useful, I'll stick with it, otherwise I may revert it. The next chapter will be released soon.

howlingwolf

Hey stranger! Great to see your story coming along. ^-^

howlingwolf

@VectorRain *Grins* Awh, don't you like it? ;)
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VectorRain

Ikr, thanks. You should do something about that collar O.O
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MidnightSpring

I liked Ryou better :>

VectorRain

It was a difficult decision, but it felt better for the overall and the long term. People unfamiliar to Japanese names were very alienated by it and it can turn off readers if they can't get a feel for it and easily pronounce it :/
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