@Monty_x to be honest, I'm still reading chapter four at the moment, and so far so good.
You're writing is perfection, You don't have as much grammar errors, heck there are no grammar errors.
Redemption is the type of book i'll be hooked on for days.
keep on updating!
The characters are kind of sketchy but the dream part in the first chapter is captivatingly weird, and i like it! :)