VegiSaur

@Disenchant I'm on it now >.< Sorry I couldn't do it before I was out the country for a while ^.^

Disenchant

Hihi, I saw your free critique discussion in the club and I was wondering if you could check out my story "Everbloom"? ^_^ There's five chapters plus a prologue, and I was wondering if you could either read the prologue and the first two chapters, since you said "up to two chapters". The prologue explains some things and I'm rambling again. Oops.
          
          It's a fantasy/adventure of five sisters who are part of a dark prophecy, cursed with forbidden powers and the fate of the two worlds (Feyworld and Humanworld) in their hands. With powerful fey calling for their blood, separated from each other and lost in an unknown world, can their undefeatable bond survive or will it crumble just like everything they've known?
          
          hehe, so it would be really appreciated ^_^