VeiledVoiiiceee

Idk, this is my first time writing something here. I was thinking of writing some one shots for Tere Bin. Like two of the worst tracks, the entire MR and Zubair-Mariyam, uske liye to details me story ka alternate likha hai, but I wanted to still write some one shots because there were a lot of missed opportunities and a lot of places where better writing could have given us much more beautiful moments. Some instances and episodes, where things could have been better with some changes, or some random additions or moments, idk. This was a thought in my mind. Please do lemme know if its NOT a good idea , I will refrain from writing. Also , if you have any speicific episodes or ideas in mind , do let them know as well. Overall, should I venture into this or not, do tell.
          	PS: Season 2 nikaalne ka plan hai bhi inlogo ka ya nahhi at this point.

VeiledVoiiiceee

@DuaaButt4 Sure, I also thought of that. Will write one shots in some time. Thanks for the suggestion .
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DuaaButt4

@VeiledVoiiiceee aur last episode KY akhri scene KY baad unki life murtasim ki Meerab aur meesam KY Sath wapas anay KY baad first night aur agli subha ka scene meesam aur murtasim KY cute moments aur meesam ki shararat aur pheli Baar chalna please yeh Sath moments bhi chahiye.
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DuaaButt4

Hello Kya ap yeh story likh sakti hai jab last episode mein murtasim haya KY hath sy ring leta hai tu dhakaya tha haya waha chup ho Gai thi jab KY haja chup honay walo mein sy nahi hai aur woh us waqt jazbaat mein akar meesam ko hamr karnay ki kosish karry aur Kisi tharha sy murtasim aur Meerab KY kamray mein ja kar room band karlay aur aur Meerab bohat zyada roney lag jaye aur saree dareaza kholnay ki Koshish karnay Lage aur phir murtasim a kar meesam ko rscur karry aur haya Thora SA meesam ko injured kar dy tab murtasim uskay sath Kya karey ga Kya yeh ap one ya two shorts mein likh sakti hai. Aur in sab mein murtasim ka Meerab ko console karna please Meri yeh request kabhi Kisi ny accept nahi ki please ap say kar Rahi hu . please.

DuaaButt4

Thank yous o much for the response. Eagerly waiting for your stories.
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VeiledVoiiiceee

@DuaaButt4 Thank you for the suggestion, I value it greatly. I will think the architecture around this and write it once I can satisfactorily envision it. Though currently I have a couple of ideas which I will write first.
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JiniPatwani

Hello the last one shot you posted was majorly focused on Murtasim's side. This time can you please write something about Meerab her emotions in episode 28 where Haya goes with Murtasim's to gaon and Meerab see them together

VeiledVoiiiceee

@JiniPatwani Yepp sure why not? I will try writing them as well and yes,  you are right about the birthday party as well, totally forgot lmao. His grip on her hand was so tight and she did anything but object to that. 
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JiniPatwani

Also from this discussion I do have a suggestion (what a rhyme) . Can you write serious of one shots reimagined about several episodes like the episode where Meerab defends Murtasim in front of Rohail and Murtasim hears that, Murtasim defends Meerab in front of Maa Begum after slap incident and Meerab hears it etc.
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JiniPatwani

@VeiledVoiiiceee Also the way Murtasim got angry about Rohail in her bday party. That was not normal anger. More like obsessive one
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VeiledVoiiiceee

Idk, this is my first time writing something here. I was thinking of writing some one shots for Tere Bin. Like two of the worst tracks, the entire MR and Zubair-Mariyam, uske liye to details me story ka alternate likha hai, but I wanted to still write some one shots because there were a lot of missed opportunities and a lot of places where better writing could have given us much more beautiful moments. Some instances and episodes, where things could have been better with some changes, or some random additions or moments, idk. This was a thought in my mind. Please do lemme know if its NOT a good idea , I will refrain from writing. Also , if you have any speicific episodes or ideas in mind , do let them know as well. Overall, should I venture into this or not, do tell.
          PS: Season 2 nikaalne ka plan hai bhi inlogo ka ya nahhi at this point.

VeiledVoiiiceee

@DuaaButt4 Sure, I also thought of that. Will write one shots in some time. Thanks for the suggestion .
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DuaaButt4

@VeiledVoiiiceee aur last episode KY akhri scene KY baad unki life murtasim ki Meerab aur meesam KY Sath wapas anay KY baad first night aur agli subha ka scene meesam aur murtasim KY cute moments aur meesam ki shararat aur pheli Baar chalna please yeh Sath moments bhi chahiye.
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readerdeepthi

Hi. Liked your stories a lot. Missing your updates. Will you be writing any more

VeiledVoiiiceee

@readerdeepthi Hi yeah, I am right now a bit busy with life per se, but I do plan on finishing Guilt and reconciliation. Will get to it as soon as I can.
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