VeloriaValmonta

La Guaira, morning. The sun is melting reality. On the hotel terrace, a man in black materializes — a man who has no business being here. He eats pabellón, mops up someone else's spill with his handkerchief, and contemplates the water pressure in the shower, burgundy silk, his appointment calendar. Of her, he does not think. Not once. That is the real danger.
          	
          	New part of The Orbit of Her Wound: https://www.wattpad.com/1610725514-the-orbit-of-her-wound-13-at-the-watering-hole

Divaeruogho

Hey Velora. I hope this message finds you well. I saw your comment on my novel days ago and I was surprised. You're actually the first one to leave a comment, since I'm writing that work on the body of a previous novel. I'm going through a lot in my personal life, but that single comment actually touched me. Not the word exactly —though I am also grateful, but the fact that my work wasn't lost in some limbo. Your comment truly matters to me and it's a push I didn't think I needed.
          
          What I'm trying to say is, thank you Velora. Truly.

VeloriaValmonta

La Guaira, morning. The sun is melting reality. On the hotel terrace, a man in black materializes — a man who has no business being here. He eats pabellón, mops up someone else's spill with his handkerchief, and contemplates the water pressure in the shower, burgundy silk, his appointment calendar. Of her, he does not think. Not once. That is the real danger.
          
          New part of The Orbit of Her Wound: https://www.wattpad.com/1610725514-the-orbit-of-her-wound-13-at-the-watering-hole

ChaptersAndCoffee

Hey
          I wanted to share something close to my heart.
          Whispers of a wandering heart-its just not a book it’s me trying to do what I love but was always hesitant to do.
          So if you love a easy going,feel good,slow burn,love story about a girl who thinks she can’t get that heart melting,butterflies in the stomach kinda love but then she experiences love at the moment when she least expected it to happen-do give my book a read and share your views on it,it would mean a lot to me
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/398531389?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=ChaptersAndCoffee

VeloriaValmonta

A bedroom turned sanctuary, turned operating theatre. She floats in a feverish limbo — a constellation of chills and heat. He does not heal. He observes, catalogs, waits. The illness is not a crisis to be solved, but a language to be mastered. His silent vigil begins.
          
          Chapter 6, Part I is here: https://www.wattpad.com/1597228940-the-orbit-of-her-wound-chapter-6-1-a-constellation

VeloriaValmonta

Velvet darkness, saturated with night jasmine. A man haunted by the scent of her fear and the echo of her lie: "It's just a ritual." His mistake was permission. His vengeance will be a new creation. What is more dangerous: a hunter who feels your fever from miles away, or a guardian who has decided to rebuild you from the ashes of your own illness? His silent war declares itself.
          Chapter 5, Part II is here: https://www.wattpad.com/1594573015-the-orbit-of-her-wound-chapter-5-2-black-dawn