@VelvetSkyline
Hi, I see that you've started to follow me. I've just done my first upload. If you get a chance would you have a look? Only asking as you're a follower lol. LOVE The Shadows :)
Thank you (This is VelvetSkyline btw) and I'll check it out :P I don't really use this wattpad anymore, I use CarbonMoon and I am glad you like The Shadows :)) if you like that maybe you would like Born of Ashes so check it out if you want :)) x
Thanks for following me! :)
Lol that is okay! :3 xx
Me too ;) xx
Yeah I hate it when a book is too fast too!! You kind of have to have a middle ground. If you're first chapter is too slow or fast you'll lose the reader (I've learnt this the hard way). The first chapter sets up whole of the book. You need to get your plot rolling. So maybe you could start off with meeting King Alec but skip back to the beginning with something like: "Let me explain how this all came to be..." I don't know! I like your story all the same and I'll carry on reading! I hope this helps BTW! :P xx
I won't be uploading for sometime! I have lots of work to do and I want to work on The Alone Boy for a while. Check it out! "The Alone Boy by CarbonMoon" @CarbonMoon
@aceofspace It's okay!! :DDD xx
@VelvetSkyline Your welcome, I like making people happy :D and thank you as well
@aceofspace Yeah I'll check it out!! And when I can think of what to do for the next chapter I'll update lol!!! Thank you for your support on my stories!! :DD xx
thanks for all of your support with all of my books so far, would you be able to comment or give feedback to my newest book which i am not taking down, please. and could you update The Shadows soon please :)
