Leizniz

Hmm, bro is underrated...

Noct_Lupus

@VelvetX03 Yeeeeep, your really are a hidden gem mate. Found out your works a few days ago, while taking a break to my study, and i'd enjoyed it so far ( ̄ω ̄)b.
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Leizniz

@VelvetX03 was talking about both works and follows, your thing is pretty interesting.
            And yeah, views don't really matter. A lot of us write on a whim.
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VelvetX03

@i_am_delusional If you are talking about my works, I don't really think so. Besides I don't write for views anyway, I just enjoy exercising my brain through writing and sharing it with people.
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Darkberserk21

Thanks for following me I like your work especially on the Parasite Wish so I'm excited especially the relationship between them is way different that the main Y1 so yeah can't wait also did you read my work what do you think 

VelvetX03

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@Darkberserk21 It is really hard to balance making Kiyo grow as a person but still keeping him in his light novel persona. Quite frankly, if one wants to write a romantic relationship with Kiyo that is properly and organically developed it might take hundreds of chapters and events, therefore I will try to base his relationship and persona on the changes and developments we have seen throughout the light novel.
            
            Before Y2V9.5 it was shown that Kiyo had some growth in his character, but the last volume just completely killed 25+ volumes of his change. Seriously, he is still questioning what a friendship is after two years of ANHS. I don't like where Kinu is taking Kiyo's character, he has been reduced to an edgy typical "dark isekai" MC who spouts bullshit about manipulating everyone and being the best.
            
            My goal is to avoid this by making Kiyotaka actively take the necessary steps in an attempt to change. In the light novel he is not truly trying to become different and emotionally better person, here he will do his best for the sake of keeping of having somewhat stable relationship with Kei.
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Darkberserk21

@VelvetX03 I see make it a more realistic relationship that fueled with developments especially from Kiyo were he should be more human and we should understand his unknown feelings to Keib
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VelvetX03

@Darkberserk21 Thank you for your praise. I am trying to actually showcase the intricacies of Kiyotaka's weird and unexplained obsession with Kei and also write a somewhat realistic change in her without discarding her realization that she loves Kiyo in Y1V7.5.  I will try my best to write a proper relationship with them without butchering their characters.
            
            And yes, I am actively reading your story, and gotta say I love it. Time travel is one of my favorite tropes, it is especially interesting with a character like Kiyotaka. He finally has the opportunity to fix his regrets and build a healthier relationship with Kei. I am eager to see where you take the story.
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