Velvet Mist

If you have the time, please read and comment on my SidAlia novel  What Goes Around. I need to know what you think! I've seen your comments on other stories and they are constructive comments which I'm looking for at this time. I need to know if this story is good enough to be published.
          
          It would be appreciated if you can find the time to comment on the chapters.
          
          Thank you!

Hey, 
          Its 8:25 pm... I am somewhere in this big world trying to get my shit together, trying to be happy, try to fight my inner demons and most of all trying to amazingly live this life given to me...
          I know everyone out there have their own problems well, we all do. But you know what we sometimes want no one and sometimes someone to hold us at our bad... Sometimes not want to talk an sometimes let all anger frustration to be out... 
          Don't want to get judged... Dont want a heart ache. But still this happens and its okie. We get judged, heart breaks, people leaving us... This is all life... What i want to say is "Never ever quit on yourself " you are doing the best you can do. Just dont let yourself down... If no one's on side remember one thing 'YOU' will be with yourself no matter what. You come this far and believe me you will go far and at last you will be there where you are meant to be...
          
          Have a good evening 
          and good day.... 

Well, i dont know if this is the right place to say something or not but i still doing it even no one reads it. I read books, i mean so many books in here on the wattpad as a silent reader. I never comment on them how the story is and i will never do that because all the books i had read was amazing. Writers face so many criticism i know i have read comments but i just want to say please ignore them they dont deserve your time not at all.... I am thanking every writer who published his/her stories or story in here for us to read even the ones who never did but writing them silently not publishing them just saving them on phones or laptop or anywhere. Thanks for making us believe that every story has a happy ending and if its not end on a happy note it means the story still going on you just have to stay tuned.... At the end thank you to every writer and reader.... 
          
          Thank you. So much. 
          Good day...

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