Vendalia3

His twisted desire- Chapter 6 updated.
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/354162140

darknight7250

hey i will read your story as soon as possible but are you interested in genuine partnership where we read each others book and give honest opinion and if you are in plz let me know

darknight7250

oh i see actually the whole story except story zero goes on perspective of viraj only in some last stanzas i narrated it
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Vendalia3

@darknight7250 Well first, the chapters are short and really easy to read. Your way of describing things is really good. The same goes with your characters name( I like this part very much). The only thing is that there seems to confusion with characters pov on few places. Otherwise it's great.
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darknight7250

@Vendalia3 so how do you like my story
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