Vendiofa

Hi! Chapter 4 is officially out! This one turned out a little longer than the rest, ops .w. But I hope people enjoy it regardless. As this chapter turned out double the lenght of any other I must ask, did you find the chapter boring? was there not enough action to hold peoples attention? Feedback regarding this chapter, be it negative or positive would be essential as this is a really long one, and mostly not action focused. Thank you for reading and I wish you all the best!

Vendiofa

Hi! Chapter 4 is officially out! This one turned out a little longer than the rest, ops .w. But I hope people enjoy it regardless. As this chapter turned out double the lenght of any other I must ask, did you find the chapter boring? was there not enough action to hold peoples attention? Feedback regarding this chapter, be it negative or positive would be essential as this is a really long one, and mostly not action focused. Thank you for reading and I wish you all the best!

Vendiofa

Hi! Chapter 3 is officially out! Sorry for taking so long, but I was visiting family on the weekend so I couldn't really work on it at all. .w. I should be on schedule with the rest of the chapter tho, so expect the next by sunday... hopefully :P If you have any feedback, be it negative or positive regarding the chapter or the story as a whole, feel free to let me know every bit of feedback helps a ton! Thank you for reading and I wish you all the best!

Eevo_the_eevee

@Vendiofa Nice! I'll message you my friend code on Chess.com!
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Eevo_the_eevee

Do you listen to music while Writing? Cause I listen to something that doesn't fit anywhere in my stories XD 
          
          https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yltiKGs6LhE&list=RDyltiKGs6LhE&start_radio=1

Eevo_the_eevee

Yea I listen to that type of Music. And that's also why the events in CH. 7 happened...
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Vendiofa

@Eevo_the_eevee It’s a certified banger! I think I heard it before, but never knew the name so thanks!
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Eevo_the_eevee

@Vendiofa This has no lyrics so ur in luck :D... Just... Yeah no Lyrics, That's all I'm saying 
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Dark_frost_72930

Dark_frost_72930

@ Dark_frost_72930  yeah that's my art
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Vendiofa

@Dark_frost_72930 :D the art looks really good! Quick question. What do you use to draw? Ie hardware software and that kind
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Eevo_the_eevee

Lmao I just realized your PFP is a vaporeon and not some kind of fish/whale. I had to look at it closely XD. (the pupil looked like a whale/fish whenever I looked at it. I had no idea what the other stuff (the vaporeon's face) was however lol)

Vendiofa

@Eevo_t_Eevee Don't cry, I am just a fish
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Eevo_the_eevee

@Vendiofa Don't kill me
            Just help me swim away
            From everyone, I need a place to stay
            Where I can cover up my face
            
            Don't cry, I am just a fish!
            I am just a fish!
            I am just a fish!
            I am just a fish!
            
            My mouth is filled with hooks I bite
            Black holes, cover up my eyes
            I dream of you, almost every night
            Hopefully, I'll swim away this time!
            I'll swim away this time!
            I'll swim away this time!
            I'll swim away this time!
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Vendiofa

@Eevo_t_Eevee Yeah Vaporeon is Feesh, u right
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Vendiofa

Hi! Part 2 is out, it took a lot out of me but I really enjoyed writing it. This being my longest chapter yet. If you have any feedback regarding part 2 or the whole story in general please let me know! Every negative/positive feedback helps me a ton in improving my writing. Thank you for reading and I wish you all the best!

Vendiofa

@Eevo_the_eevee true :D Then imo you should release it now!
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Eevo_the_eevee

@Vendiofa IDK what! If I knew I wouldn't be asking you. :c
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Vendiofa

Hi! I decided to rewrite most of Chapter one as I wasn't happy with the dialog at the slightest, I ended up with something that I'm more proud of but I think its still not perfect. If you have any feedback be it negative or positive feel free to let me know, as any type of feedback helps a ton! Thanks for reading and I wish you all the best!

Vendiofa

@Eevo_t_Eevee I don't think the school itself was, but the kids were bullying him for being shiny
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