I love to write (well, you probably already guessed that, since I have an account on here). I consider my characters a part of me as well as my friends. It may sound weird, but it's just how I am. I like to include bits and pieces of my life into my writing. It makes me feel like a part of the story. It's like an escape to a paradise for me.
I love my writing and don't like it when people compliment writing or drawings with, Oh, that's so good! or oh,that's so cool. I prefer constructive criticism and proper English, thank you. As my friends say, I am complete Grammar Nazi. So, please don't end your sentences with prepositions. For example, 'where are you AT?' That is one of my biggest pet peeves. Along with how some grocery stores have the item lane that say, 12 items or less, when it should say 12 items or fewer.
NOTE:
The story I'm mostly focusing on right now is, The Immortal Man. And I would appreciate any and all feedback on what you guys think of it. Please tell me if you see something that needs to/could use improvement.
- "In a little crooked house."
- JoinedApril 14, 2014
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Jan 21, 2015 03:24PM
I am Having writer's block, so "The Immortal Man" will be on hold until further notice. I am making it my goal to have the first draft done by the end of 2015.View all Conversations
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