Venus Amari

I am rewriting the story again since nobody liked it that much. Tell me ways how to improve please because I am still learning. Thank you for reading.

I decided instead of going straight to Chapter 3 I need to edit my previous chapters to be more engaging and better. I am just learning how to write this genre and barely have any experience so I know it is not as good as I hope to be yet. I am trying my best to improve. Tell me any suggestions of how to improve. Thank you for reading.

I decided to try out Wattpad again to see if I misjudged and I am experimenting with a new genre. This story is meant less to be God vs Satan and more of a cat and mouse game like Death Note. I do not intend to demonize either God or Satan. I am working on Chapter Two of Pandora's Doll and will publish it as soon as possible. I invite you all to give me feedback on the story in the comments on how it can be better. Thank you for reading.