TheLambdaRebel107
Quick question since I haven't read much of your story: does it have any lemons? Or if there are any sex scenes, are they brief while not going into too much detail and leaving most of it implied and up to imagination?
TheLambdaRebel107
@VergilWolf okay, also I should mention that Borger takes a while to update his stories. The main reason is due to life reasons among other things, but when they do get new chapters posted it's worth the wait.
VergilWolf
@TheLambdaRebel107 Gotcha, I’ll take a look when I have time. In the meantime, if you have any kind of feedback, do let me know. I’m open to constructive criticism, given it’s the only way one improves really.
TheLambdaRebel107
@VergilWolf I would recommend reading some of the Helluva Boss stories by TheBorgerman cause not only are his MaleReaderXLoona stories good, but he doesn't do sex scenes or harems in his stories and just leaves it up to interpretation.